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Daddy Goose38
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0 posted 2011-08-23 07:38 PM



Wordless Sighs and Moans
Enchantment


The bewitched, enchanted eyes and fingers
through which we see each other and all living things,
the Sun, Moon, stars and everything beyond,
are metaphorically seated in the heart.
When you let me feel
through your filmy, satin curves,
I see everything that you can show me,
both the visible and the secret,
and with an ethereal, shimmering radiance, as you do.
, Please, whisper me,
in wordless sighs and moans,
of all the colors, shades and hews there are.
Please, whisper to me, as only you can do ...
For whatever we arbitrarily call "real,"
is really just made of fantasies and dreams.


So come to me tonight.
Be hasty in your flight!
Fill my waiting arms,
love, and hold me ever, ever so tight.
Please, materialize for me tonight? ...
Please? ...
Please? ...
Please? ... ...
And now, good night!

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-08-23 07:44 PM


WOW! Oh my goodness Jaime, fantastic!
Lori

Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger
2 posted 2011-08-23 08:31 PM


Well I will write ANYTHING for the wowwords ogf Lori!
:---------------------)!!!
Sweet dreams of moans and sighs tonight!
Jaime

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-08-23 10:43 PM


ogf???
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4 posted 2011-08-26 03:56 PM


whisper me,
in wordless sighs and moans,
of all the colors, shades and hews there are.

Saying so much when saying nothing at all... I love these lines!

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-08-26 09:52 PM


Enjoyed your poem,
Smiling,
Ms. E

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