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of sighs, in soul place find
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of sighs, in soul place find |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there is a rising in the eastern sky at dawn like the brim of your sighs has opened and from your lips there are whisperings sounds speaking in other tongues at first then of sudden as is in a love song familiar sprinkles over the unturned stones polishing them into recognition slowly til they are diamonds with mirrors around comfortable is a lane seldom traveled but it is maintained by the chosen ones so when a traveler sends down her soul it finds it way to surroundings like gloves that fit within the freedom of their capture ___________ daark |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You pave the way with great care then maintain it beautifully, kinda like "adopt a sighway" Makes me wanna go for a drive~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue, the road is open and I have a full tank of thank yous. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I tried to select my favorite lines but I love them all... Your sighs are sweet ones today. *S* Beautiful!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks pretty lady for your brushes of skin |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"... that fit within the freedom of their capture" comforting words to the traveler, Enjoyed Dark, Ms. E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks ms E |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wonderful imagery, dear D.! And the title? The quintessence of love's emotional intensity ... Love, Margherita |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
wonderful way with words, as always. Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks to you lady friend ____________ ms kat, thanks so much ms |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
WOW love it!! Ecspecially the last part .... "comfortable is a lane seldom traveled but it is maintained by the chosen ones so when a traveler sends down her soul it finds it way to surroundings like gloves that fit within the freedom of their capture" You have a unique way with words one that leaves me speechless everytime but this one even more so!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king....it is always a pleasure to listen to your wordless sighs |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you Sir, I appreciate your reads. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I anticipate opening your poetry. I never really know what I will find or what will catch my eye. I am totally into shiney things and get distracted easily, but I find myself weaving through your words. And I am entranced. Thank you. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, you are welcome any time thanks ms |
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