Open Poetry #47 |
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ease of coins |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
the ease of coins how we spin them into spend then thrust them into the folds to make the music play in our belly how we move our hips around on the wood floor splintering lusting the puncture of thorns panting to lick the cactus with tongues the ease of coins how me bend them into spend pressing them through our pores stretching around their metal sounds how we move our lips around on the wooden worship shivering gnashing her tendons to helpless then binding her to our mastheads where her womb nests hourly demons ______________ daark |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok so you lost me! Sometimes you just dive a little too deep and I start losing my breath at some point. Veeerrry interesting coin toss. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue..I am glad it was you that asked...has to do with sex and lust and all that yucky stuff that makes you wiggle your foot when talking about it. Thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Coins and demons so powerfully associated. Primal instincts have never been rendered with more intellectual efficiency I think. ... and combined with your poetic genius this write becomes a rare exploration of our deepest psyche. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thank you for the review ms.... |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Licking cactus - sounds interestingly painful to me. Like this, D. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, they taste like chicken..thanks babe |
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