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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-26 08:27 AM



the ease of coins
how we spin them into spend
then thrust them into the folds
to make the music play in our belly

how we move our hips around
on the wood floor splintering
lusting the puncture of thorns
panting to lick the cactus with tongues

the ease of coins
how me bend them into spend
pressing them through our pores
stretching around their metal sounds

how we move our lips around
on the wooden worship shivering
gnashing her tendons to helpless
then binding her to our mastheads

where her womb nests hourly demons

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daark

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2011-08-26 12:20 PM


Ok so you lost me! Sometimes you just dive a little too deep and I start losing my breath at some point.  

Veeerrry interesting coin toss.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-08-26 12:26 PM


babyblue..I am glad it was you that asked...has to do with sex and lust and all that yucky stuff that makes you wiggle your foot when talking about it.  Thanks babe
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-08-26 03:51 PM


Coins and demons so powerfully associated. Primal instincts have never been rendered with more intellectual efficiency I think.

... and combined with your poetic genius this write becomes a rare exploration of our deepest psyche.

Love,
Margherita


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-08-26 04:07 PM


ms mar...thank you for the review ms....
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
5 posted 2011-08-29 01:00 AM


Licking cactus - sounds interestingly painful to me.

Like this, D.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-08-29 08:02 AM


ms ali-san, they taste like chicken..thanks babe
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