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Open Poetry #47

Never be complete

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-08-17 09:03 PM

Content,  I will never be,

  while you are seperate from me.

Desperation seems soon to take hold,

  anxiety also grows to bold.

As I despair, an empty void,

  disparging memories of all we enjoyed.

I turn and walk without the light,

  that I cherished with you every night.

I search to find you, high and low,

  to win your heart before you go.

My love so bright that it shown,

  a love so deep that you have never known.

For without you there is only defeat,

for I, nor my heart, will never be complete.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2011-08-17 09:55 PM

We can't give up on love.
Enjoyed your poem,
Ms E.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2011-08-18 12:17 PM

Nicly done!
Kat >^..^<

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-08-19 02:19 PM

As I despair, an empty void,

disparging memories of all we enjoyed.

I turn and walk without the light,

that I cherished with you every night.

You have written the longing so well... great poem!

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