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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-08-17 07:30 PM

FOREVER
17 August 2011

It is the little sparks of magic
that light the night sky with stars
and the sunlight glints
that brush green leaves golden

that are as forever
as special love can be
though few of us
are brave enough
to dream it
and fewer still
to make it so.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-08-17 07:55 PM

Yep. There are not many who can grasp the magic of the world around them. I don't for the most part, but at least I am aware of that fact.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-08-17 08:07 PM

Thanks, Jerry, for reading and commenting.

Owl

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-08-17 08:10 PM

Ms. Owl,
Yes, brave, taking the chance even if it means rejection.
Enjoyed your poem.
Ms. E

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-08-17 08:15 PM

Thank you eg. I was really referring to working at it to make it last.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-08-18 05:46 AM

Most beautiful comparison, dear Owl, and you are right about the number of those who succeed!

Forever can be touched within a moment's magic.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-08-18 12:40 PM

Thank you, Margherita. I believe that lasting happiness between a man and a woman is, nevertheless, possible. Whilst this may sound and be simplistic, I believe that there are only two basic (note, "basic") requirements - firstly a man and a woman to bring themselves together and who are like-minded enough in as few or as many ways to supply the magnetism, and secondly, the willingness and commitment of both of them to work at making it work with deep-seated happiness for both.

Owl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2011-08-19 02:20 PM

I'm not sure which I love more... the beautiful poem or your response... both are wonderful!!

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