Open Poetry #47 |
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of myrrh and strum |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
there is a place like the afternoon and dawn where we can listen to the voices of the warm and your eyes have that moisture at their edges not tears or laughter, but both tears and laughter you wear that gown that you say is a jesus color how pure a blue it is when your pale is near to have a heavenly effect along the edges but then I would sin if I spend thoughts there you are serpentine in your recline, as horizons that meet the eye on dawn brim mornings and your belly is subtle in it's vulnerability as the scent of myrrh brings your lips a smile my finger is a diamond in reflection hovering above your navel pool that waits to worship as the heat of your sensuality warms my digit not touching, but a voyeur above in shimmer cape elongation of liquid, it is a ceremony in time as a single droplet is seduced to your hollow to free fall into orbit more slowly than love and your skin responds with its taut applause as in the distance heartbeats quicken their strum ________ daark (forbidden series) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a masterpiece, dear D.! Good that to write a comment I need not necessarily to breathe ... will read this again, as it is magnetic. Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend....you bless me |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is poetry such as this that makes me want to wrap myself up in it and dream awhile. Ya move me dude! *sigh* [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-16-2011 07:42 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You put more romance into seduction... hmmmm... okay, my thoughts were side-wiped... ahem... thank goodness there aren't ten of you on the board... we women would never get anything done. ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...ya wanna talk? thanks babe _____________ sweetsun, thank you lady..your voice makes me ache |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I really love the first verse... the soft and sensitive before the sensual. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern. Thanks. Lady. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Mmmmmmmm, Ms. E |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very seductive!! Enjoyed!!!! Kat >^..^< |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful, worshipful, such passion and respect in this poem. So tenderly handled...I love this one, Dark. Amaryllis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E, thank you for the m and m s _______________ Thank you ms Kat ~____________ Thank you Amary' |
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