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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-08-16 06:40 AM

there is a place like the afternoon and dawn
where we can listen to the voices of the warm
and your eyes have that moisture at their edges
not tears or laughter, but both tears and laughter

you wear that gown that you say is a jesus color
how pure a blue it is when your pale is near
to have a heavenly effect along the edges
but then I would sin if I spend thoughts there

you are serpentine in your recline, as horizons
that meet the eye on dawn brim mornings
and your belly is subtle in it's vulnerability
as the scent of myrrh brings your lips a smile

my finger is a diamond in reflection hovering
above your navel pool that waits to worship
as the heat of your sensuality warms my digit
not touching, but a voyeur above in shimmer cape

elongation of liquid, it is a ceremony in time
as a single droplet is seduced to your hollow
to free fall into orbit more slowly than love
and your skin responds with its taut applause

as in the distance heartbeats quicken their strum

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daark (forbidden series)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-08-16 08:25 AM

This is a masterpiece, dear D.! Good that to write a comment I need not necessarily to breathe ...
will read this again, as it is magnetic.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-08-16 08:27 AM

ms mar, thank you lady friend....you bless me

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-08-16 06:52 PM

It is poetry such as this that makes me want to wrap myself up in it and dream awhile.

Ya move me dude! *sigh*

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-16-2011 07:42 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-08-16 07:59 PM

You put more romance into seduction...
hmmmm...

okay, my thoughts were side-wiped...

ahem...

thank goodness there aren't ten of you
on the board...

we women would never get anything done.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-08-17 06:22 AM

babyblue...ya wanna talk? thanks babe

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sweetsun, thank you lady..your voice makes me ache

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-08-18 04:14 PM

I really love the first verse... the soft and sensitive before the sensual. *S*

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-08-18 04:51 PM

Ms suthern. Thanks. Lady.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2011-08-18 09:04 PM

Mmmmmmmm,
Ms. E

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

9 posted 2011-08-18 10:10 PM

Very seductive!! Enjoyed!!!!
Kat >^..^<

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

10 posted 2011-08-18 11:29 PM

Beautiful, worshipful, such passion and respect in this poem. So tenderly handled...I love this one, Dark.

Amaryllis

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2011-08-19 05:58 AM

Ms E, thank you for the m and m s

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Thank you ms Kat

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Thank you Amary'

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