Open Poetry #47 |
just to have you |
karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
I got your pictures on my wall But I'm afraid to make that call Honey I'll give you my all Just to have you... I'm gonna change the way I look I'm gonna read your favorite book I'm gonna fight captain hook Just to have you... I'm gonna be like Tinkerbell And make everything go well I'll write more stories to tell Just to have you... It's gonna take it a while For me to see your smile To see those lovely eyes And make you realize I'm gonna go to that ball Leave my shoe in the hall I'll give you my heart and soul Just to have you... I'm gonna sleep for a hundred years Just to get one sweet kiss That's something I wont miss If I just have you... The witch may take you away But I'll find you everyday I'll scare the dragon away Baby I'm here to stay... You're my once upon a time If only you were mine Baby you're the only thing That can give me happy ending... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Karen I loved this! So pure, sincere, and sweet. Best wishes getting this person you, just have to have. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
wow, thank you.. i dont think im gonna have him though.. hehe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So lovely, dear Karren! A joy to read, makes the heart dance ... and then enjoy what you already have, probably! Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope you get your happy ending... this is delightful! |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
suthern, margherita thanks, im glad you enjoyed it "i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you" |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Happiest of endings, enjoyed your poem, karen29, ms. e |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thanks ms e.. " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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