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karren29
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0 posted 2011-10-01 02:51 AM



I got your pictures on my wall
But I'm afraid to make that call
Honey I'll give you my all
Just to have you...

I'm gonna change the way I look
I'm gonna read your favorite book
I'm gonna fight captain hook
Just to have you...

I'm gonna be like Tinkerbell
And make everything go well
I'll write more stories to tell
Just to have you...

It's gonna take it a while
For me to see your smile
To see those lovely eyes
And make you realize

I'm gonna go to that ball
Leave my shoe in the hall
I'll give you my heart and soul
Just to have you...

I'm gonna sleep for a hundred years
Just to get one sweet kiss
That's something I wont miss
If I just have you...

The witch may take you away
But I'll find you everyday
I'll scare the dragon away
Baby I'm here to stay...

You're my once upon a time
If only you were mine
Baby you're the only thing
That can give me happy ending...


© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
Richy
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1 posted 2011-10-01 03:00 AM



Karen I loved this!

So pure, sincere, and sweet.

Best wishes getting this person you,
just have to have.



karren29
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2 posted 2011-10-01 03:05 AM


wow, thank you.. i dont think im gonna have him though.. hehe
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-10-01 03:48 AM


So lovely, dear Karren! A joy to read, makes the heart dance ... and then enjoy what you already have, probably!

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2011-10-01 12:53 PM


I hope you get your happy ending... this is delightful!
karren29
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5 posted 2011-10-01 11:50 PM


suthern, margherita thanks, im glad you enjoyed it

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

ebonygirl
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6 posted 2011-10-02 05:59 PM


Happiest of endings, enjoyed your poem, karen29,
ms. e

karren29
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7 posted 2011-10-04 07:22 PM


thanks ms e..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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