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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-04 10:32 AM


Why
when we all want the same
To live free
free from the fear of violence
No matter if that violence
comes from war
or a lost generation
fighting in the streets
or even from the person
lying in bed next to us
We all want to love and be loved
To feed and clothe ourselves
and the ones we love
To provide medicine
when they are ill
We want to learn and work
to feel a sense of achievement
self-worth and community
Why
When so simple our need
So common our goal
That we cannot succeed?
Why
When so easily
it could have been
me instead of you
filling your skin
or find it’s my shoes
you are walking in
we can’t live peacefully?


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-04 12:56 PM


Greed. You don't have to be a rich person or a Wall Street Banker to be greedy, Lori. Greed can also rear its ugly head when someone wants what someone else has, but doesn't want to work for it.

Street violence is political intimidation. To take down the status quo.

Good poem, Lori.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-10-04 01:31 PM


Thanks Jerry!
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-10-04 07:45 PM


"Why
When so simple our need
So common our goal
That we cannot succeed?"

Excellent Lori, and a very good question.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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