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karren29
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0 posted 2011-10-03 04:35 PM



a poem i wrote for my daughter..


You cry for the first time
And that makes me smile
I'm glad that you are mine
Never been this happy for a while

U laughed today
And all I wanna say
Is you take my breath away
I'll be here to stay

People come and go
But know I love you so

You take a step for the first time
And that makes me smile
But you fell to the ground
I cried without a sound

And told you honey it's okay
You'll be walking fast one day

Now you run and hide
Babe you're my pride
You're my little baby
And soon you'll be a beautiful lady

Time flies by so fast
But I'll always look to the past

You have my eyes
But you got his smile
You have a beautiful heart
People say you're smart

I know you're wondering why
There's no daddy to hold you tight
Little girl please don't cry
Everything will be alright

Mommy's got your hand
I know one day you'll understand
Things didn't go well for dad and I
But I'll always be by your side

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

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suthern
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1 posted 2011-10-03 08:34 PM


I hope you save this for her! She'll love it when she reads it... she'll love it more when she has a child of her own. *S*
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-10-03 08:38 PM


Beautiful. Just beautiful.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

karren29
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3 posted 2011-10-03 10:24 PM


thank you suthern

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

karren29
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since 2011-09-29
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4 posted 2011-10-03 10:24 PM


thanks jerry

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-10-04 07:07 PM


Wise and beautiful Mommy-Poetess you are!

M

karren29
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6 posted 2011-10-04 07:10 PM


thanks margherita, a lot

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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