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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Drawn back in a ponytail There are more than a few Strands of hair that insist upon Their freedom around your brow I have found as well there are A few things I cannot change However hard I may try And I have tried more than You will ever know A summer breeze cools us As we walk along the shore Seagulls gyre in a deep blue sky Above the bay It seems I have no choice But to spend my days Always loving you There’s nothing else to say . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A sad, but exquisite painting that lingers long in the mind's eye. What a beautiful name she has too, Russian, I am almost certain. Russian is a language that fascinates me with its vibrant music and an alphabet that has some letters similar to those of Attic Greek with which I was passionately in love when I was studying it, but which I have long since forgotten (well, most of it), to my dismay. Would love to make the time, to study it again - but I am rambling - but it is your poem that led me down paths of long ago. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
One of those poems that seems to be a part of all that was or will be. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It seems I have no choice But to spend my days Always loving you There’s nothing else to say Returned or not, some loves stay with us and define us. And I have tried more than You will ever know Having tried too long without success, this goes straight to my heart. Beautiful work! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. JL  |
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