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Rendered Senseless
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Rendered Senseless Be that woman always standing so desolate on the cornerstone be that moment the one before I found out what it means to be alone crack open the safes of me take what you want, leave a little pathetic life for me Rendered senseless by your smile dragged underneath spiral stars some thousand miles down the winding river from where I was born born to adore you, it's more than you baby, what's next to the moon? Be that sparkle that spins around my eyes when I'm weeping beat that minute that it takes for this blood to keep me breathing sift through debris of me find out what it takes to set me like a diamond dream Rendered senseless by your heart left dangling upon the strings of my broken guitar through a mighty, biting wind I'll get to you it's you I adore, I want more and more baby, what's love got in store? An imitation conflagration 'cause what is the sun next to you? and I command the gravitation consult my maps and charts and align with this magnet heart only you can render me senseless with your angelic temptation, and... Could you be that woman the one that drifts through my darkest dreaming and in one second the one before I found out true love and it's meaning I felt so tired and so lost but I'll take what I want, and leave behind this broken ol' carcass 'cause all this time has turned to dust and I want to find a bluer sky to save my wings from rusting I'm rendered senseless by your smile I've been so damned but now I'll set these clothes on fire so you'll see me long way down your ghostly road you rode to rescue light from the deepest gloom baby, what's next to the moon? let it shine Be that woman always standing so desolate on cornerstones be that moment before I found it what it means to be no longer alone. "Use your heart as a weapon and it hurts like heaven" -Coldplay,'Hurts Like Heaven' |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Be that sparkle that spins around my eyes when I'm weeping beat that minute that it takes for this blood to keep me breathing sift through debris of me find out what it takes to set me like a diamond dream I really like this... especially these lines! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice song. JL  |
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