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If He Might
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If He Might |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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If He Might There was pleasure to be seen In the sultry partition of clouds This early morn, When a wink of sun’s eye Contacted a mist of showers Causing rainbows to course over The lands …and I thought…if He Might grace me… Travelers of the morn saw Columns of color – slowing In their trek, appreciating The beauty …and if He might grace me With a here-after bequest… Then the morning commute Was alive with searching eyes For mayhap another prism awaits …a hereafter bequest that when I pass, I be allowed to Come again as the sun To greet my friends Dance the clouds And kiss night shadows Into submission And then reality blew the Clouds away, and yet, I wonder …what if He Might grace me? ~*~ © KRJ 8-8-11 66452 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-08-2011 04:56 PM).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
K, Do you not realize you already are a "sun, greeting your friends, dancing the cloulds, and kissing night shadows into submission?" Believe me when I say this... YOU shine brightly every day you grace us with your beautiful words. Michael |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yep...sissie...I'm agreeing with Michael!! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yep, girlie it is true, you're sunny side up all the time.  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Truly an uplifting bit of poetry, this afternoon, Miss Sunshine, and that you are spreading your wealth all around. ~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, Sunshine, I agree with Michael. ebonygirl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Michael said it first and best... I can only agree. *S* This is absolutely beautiful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think this is the most beautiful (that I've read) of your's to date, my friend, and one of the prettiest pieces I've ever read. j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Oh yeah… He has, and you are a blessed poet. Great write.  JL |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Very uplifting write, fine words, fine write. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun..I can see you at a window here...shimmering a smile...watching the stairs...enjoyed this dance ms |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very, very beautiful, Karilea in so many ways. I am intrigued as to the appearance of the word, "trek" in your poem. I thought it was a South African term (from the language Afrikaans) and unknown out of our borders. Owl |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think you already have been graced, and pass that sunshine on each day you are here. This was nice to read, as it dripped on down the page K. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I loved this piece. So well written and the feelings come across fiercely. You are a very talented poet my friend. Thanks to the opportunity to read this. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Passing through again... on my way to the library with this one. *G* |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karilea...Smooth and temder writing from one of the best. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful thoughts, Karilea. Ida |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..lovely..much enjoyed..a great wish; well, you're halfway there--your name is Sunshine!! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
We, your readers are the ones blessed.. With your poetry treasure; We, who are the green leaves of mind absorption, Basker's in the brilliant light of your words- That warm our senses By mental photosynthesis, Any starch that might sour our brains, Into sugars of reading pleasure. It is we, who are blessed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
He always blesses you and always will ... There are ways to transcend our earthly limitations and the tool to open the gates to and fro is LOVE, yet again. Most beautiful poetic ponderings, dear Karilea. Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Michael did say it best. You grace us every day. Love you and your poetry. Alison |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
ah, now you KNOW a poet named luminosity is going to love this |
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