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Tomer
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0 posted 2011-08-24 02:48 PM


Her shirt matched the even sky of the Oxford hills
Her long garment covering her body 

To this she sat with ease
The fair saunter of her eyes 
Onto the wielded fields of Oxford

Her bangs of hair waved quietly
As each strand circled the winds breathe
The clouds moved east towards the slow rise of the sun

Her brown , flat top shoes were a reminder 
Her legs, long, like the straight branches veering off into the wind
Grandmas little gift from the old side of town

She stroked her hair until nightfall
The towns lights all but forgotten
Along the Oxford hills, she sat until sunrise, undaunted.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (08-24-2011 03:53 PM).]

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JL
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1 posted 2011-08-25 01:15 AM


Nice write Tomer.

Enjoyed.

JL


ebonygirl
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2 posted 2011-08-25 02:29 PM


Enjoyed your poem Tomer,
Ms. E

Tomer
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3 posted 2011-08-30 09:49 AM


JL, thanks.  Hope all is well

Cheers

Tomer
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4 posted 2011-08-30 09:49 AM


Thanks, Ms. E

Cheers

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