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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
BLACK Whose eyes are they that look deeply within me can't turn away enthralled I stare back into his. BLACK Can he see what I'm thinking or has he seen my past the eyes can reveal completely your life path. BLACK Do you want to know who I am? Then come to me and I'll stand firm with fists clenched and walls too high to bare for those too weak to see, for only the strong to break free. BLACK I know you've come from far away journeyed through your own land seen and played with many others why do you stare so what have you found a kindred heart? Haven't you swam that way before? BLACK ______________ E.M.L.- 3/6/02 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You wrote another poem a few days ago which brought out the darkness . . . Just wondering if this is about the same person, or are you just penning fiction. It doesn't sound like fiction, it is much to heartfelt. This is the other one I am thinking about . . . "He was there dark eyes,dark hair full of life not one to stare." ~ Man who fish in other man's well often catch crabs. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Ebony... There is a shadow of seduction in your pen..and dark is mystery always..it is the prelim to discovery...please continue ms |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
It’s a tough world for the innocent, that’s all I can think about. Fine write, ebonygirl. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I also notice the dark undertones in your poetry, it's a nice touch, ebonygirl~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you all for your comments, JerryPat2, 2 different people, same me Dark, glad you approve Prasad Nataraj, innocent of heart, promise Blues Serenade, Thank you for taking time to read my poetry Ms. E |
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