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Open Poetry #47

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-08-03 06:26 PM

My love grows
in the shadowland
of loneliness
Your love shows
in the heartland
of only-ness
My love knows
that you understand
my neediness
Your light glows
within my heart and
the holes in it
Your wind blows
glass from my hot sand
of lovingness.

LGR(C)8/3/11

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2011-08-03 07:31 PM

Very nice, enjoyed your poem.
Ms.e

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-08-03 07:44 PM

Thank you kindly Ms.e!
Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-08-05 06:42 PM

"My love knows
that you understand"

Beautiful expression of love

JL

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2011-08-05 08:35 PM

It amazing how the aspects that define two people can, when combined, seem to extend beyond all boundaries. It sounds like you found someone who truly compliments you... that is a wonderful thing.

Nicely done.

Michael

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2011-08-05 08:40 PM

The wind and hot sand really does it for me.

You rock good poetess!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-08-05 09:47 PM

WoW! . . . 'nuff said.

~ Man who fish in other man's well often catch crabs. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-08-06 06:53 PM

JL, Michael, Blues & Jerry...Thank you for responding so warmly to this poem, it means a lot.

Lori

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2011-08-07 09:20 PM

This... is a delicate treasure... so beautiful!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-08-08 05:31 PM

Thanks Southern, what a really sweet thing to say!
Lori

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