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Reserving tremors
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Reserving tremors |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
The heavens unleashed brutal, angry, lacerations of light. They traversed the darkness, erupting, in conflagrations that were brilliantly bright. It was a turmoil of passion that roiled within as violently as without. The simplistic nature of my desire imparted no chance of doubt. The cataclysmal explosions that discharge from my eyes; left you with no reservations, but continuous tremors of surprise. As I came for you, a force of nature, one in command; drawing you close to me, a tempest, without a demand. The storm thrashes itself into a crescendo, our hearts, inflamed, do the same. Within the passions of our love, there is unequivocally, no space for shame. I hold you in my unyielding arms, irrevocably, where you should always be. Kissing you passionately, unrelentingly, and setting your heart, finally, free. Collectively we stand, perpetually, inexorably complete. No longer, tenuously, does my heart rest, unattended, at your feet. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
intensely romantic! Love the ending! Lori |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
Thank you. I enjoyed writing it |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You seem to like making me cry...to overfill me with feelings of complete and utter joy. To make goose flesh rise on my flesh by the mere thought of your passion. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cool moves tuff....smooth and pleasing |
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