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Open Poetry #47

between the lines of time

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-07-19 08:20 AM

you whisper woman sounds to my soul
and ask me about the boy of me
that hides behind the leather of man

your charms devour my soul slowly
as you grind this man of me
within the heat of your heaven machine

your skin is damp under my palms
as your residue of loving weeps
and your breasts rut into my chest

your nipple pens write poetry there
and then you move the words around
as your furnace heats to melt me more

and we are shuddering before explosions

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daark

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2011-07-19 10:19 AM

reminds me of another time~~

M

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-07-19 10:33 AM

Ms MMs perhaps it is or was. Thank you.

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2011-08-01 01:35 PM

such raw poetry I love this one!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-08-01 01:55 PM

Thanks angelbaby

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-08-01 03:12 PM

Excellent! The wordplay within the lines of this little doozy was mesmerizing and a delight to read . . .

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-08-01 03:24 PM

Thanks JP, much appreciated.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2011-08-01 07:49 PM

"Love, joy, fun coming my way",
like this one! LOL
ebonyg

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

8 posted 2011-08-01 09:17 PM

Ms ebony
You read me well, thanks ms

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

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Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2011-08-02 10:55 AM

I loved this. So much passion coming through it, so much life!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2011-08-02 11:04 AM

Thanks so much lady.

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