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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Backflash What… flash Hush… sounds But flickers Shhhhh scents Moments sighs There breezes Oceans depths Blues greens Darkness warmth Dejá you ©KRJ 7-29-11 "The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Very creative.....I am getting a lot of inspiration tonight many interesting poems .... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I love, love, love your last line...wish it were mine! ox Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Had to study it for a while, before I could absorb the whole. Once I did that the essence of it all came together. ~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I've read this a few times now, K. It's elegant, and quite intriguing. One almost anybody is able to dive into and connect dots, and personalize. I know I did. Would love to be able to peek into your mind and spy out the inspiration for this. Michael |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
MOST interesting !! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear Sunshine, I read your poem in several different ways, (1st across in zigzag line, then, down each column). Each time I read it, the poem evoked greater emotion. I LOVED IT! ebonygirl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Very creative writing, Sunshine. Love the thought process gone into this one. Fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun....I can see you jaunty walking down the sidewalk, glancing back over your shoulder..reading the headlines in his eyes...and the necklines...and the hemlines... kewl stuff lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm very pleased that a lot of you were able to interpret this poem for yourselves, and perhaps be part of it in your own way. Note to Michael...you really don't want to walk in that quagmire, my friend...you never know what you're going to find.  Thank you all for taking a moment to share me with you.  |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..bravo Sunshine..a new genre ..beaucoup la poesie.. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...way to go!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spiros, thank you so much, but I do not believe this a new genre, more of listening to both sides of the brain, perhaps? Where dreams start, and reality stops? Vice versa? I'm not sure, but I've been here/there in this "voice" if we could call it such...I've experienced the moments of deja vu, and can easily recall such moments back to the age of two. Certain moments still remain in the brain and I can "see" them quite easily. Sissie...thank you...but you already know all about me...and still, you remain. |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
Intense, intriguing, delightfully creative. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You never cease to amaze, like always. JL  |
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