Open Poetry #47 |
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Together apart |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa ![]() |
TOGETHER APART 19 July 2011 blending as one willow wand in the wind winding arms and legs around each other they are more than the dance and less than there Owl |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
You never cease to amaze me Diane. Your poetry is exquisite. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Marcia. I am honoured. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like subtle romantic poetry. Don't care much for the "in your face" stuff. Yours is perfectand then some, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Me too, about the “in the face” stuff, Ida. Thanks for your kind words. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"and less than there" And it is where, less than there is that is so special...a higher place than normal-stood ground, that is for certain.. "There" is where love dwells unbounded. Oh, I enjoyed this one Diana...Thank you Come read to me some poem, |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
love the alliteration, it trickles down the tongue like dew on a blade of grass |
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