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Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

0 posted 2011-07-18 09:22 PM

Unexpected turns

Sliding mysterious transparent misty veil,
Elapse through those wavy cloudy locks,
As my eyes meet your tender bloom,
That subtle radiant mystic daunting smile,
Sends adrenalin through the arch spine,

Freshness of new life surrounds my eye,
Your fragrance fills my vacant skies,
Cleverly concealing your new sprouts,
That sliding evening veil, wicked wind!
Craves for pure admiration of the highest,

Those twisty curvy unexpected turns you offer,
Give vivid fragile wings to million neurons,
Surge of new life, new blood to thy veins,
You've held your nerve, me now bouncing back,
Strength and courage you possess, I admire!

Love this terrible feeling, love at first sight,
Silent vibes we share on a wondrous rainy midnight.

©Prasad.N 19th July 2011.
All rights reserved to Prasad.N

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-07-18 10:49 PM

"Love this terrible feeling, love at first sight,"

This is constructive thinking. Love at first sight is dangerous, all you can go on is lust and hope.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

2 posted 2011-07-19 07:23 AM

Thank you for the caution, Jerry. Actually recently I met someone every beautiful, I thought we had few sparks flying. Last night, was enjoying the wonderful moon rise, the glow on the green walkways and slow rain drops. That inspired me to write this poem. Nothing serious though.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2011-07-19 10:26 AM

love your response to Jerry~~

a very romantic view

M

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-07-19 10:56 AM

excellent prasad, makes feel love in the very blood and the deep of the sentiment, thanks for the luminous words,

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

5 posted 2011-07-20 12:44 PM

Thank you for your kind words Ms. M. Appreciate it.

Good to hear from you, Yann. Thank you for your kind words too, Appreciate it

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

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