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Camelot |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. For some it was Not long enough For others It never was No white knight Seeking the Grail A maiden in his heart No words or deeds In the name of love Worthy of memory After all is said and done It must be hard To face the end of time Without a beautiful story To call one’s own Ah Let us drink The good wine while we can And keep the unfortunate Outside our walls . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really like this one, it has very interesting context that makes me read it over again. Juju -Juju |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Juju Your compliments are accolades Thanks for reading John . |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Ah Let us drink The good wine while we can And keep the unfortunate Outside our walls excellent lines yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Camelot has a special place in my heart, John, along with this poem. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you It may be the best thing I've written in recent times Thanks again John . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I don't know if it is your best, you have some very nice ones as well, but it is in the top 5 (At least for me, the author's opinion is always more important) juju -Juju |
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