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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-06-14 09:36 PM

Duet among Selves

Uno

When everyone
Leaves me, I’ll
Write, honestly

~*~

Dos

Honestly!
When everyone leaves
I will write!

~*~

Tres

Honestly?
Yes, I will, I will!
But, truly?

~*~

© KRJ
6-14-11 8:34

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-15-2011 08:35 AM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-06-14 10:28 PM

Hahaha!!

"When everyone
Leaves me, I’ll
Write, honestly"

Does this mean that you haven't been writing honestly all this time because someone wouldn't leave? Or, do you mean that if everyone will just get the hell out of your business you'll write, honestly!

Uh, I'm afraid to tackle the other two verses, might get me in big time trouble, and word is out on you, you're tough.

~ Those are my principles, and if you don't like them ... well, I have others. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2011-06-14 10:44 PM

well done!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-06-15 08:56 AM

Thank you, Gentlemen.

Hmmmm. "Tough". Someone is possibly referring to my old, dried up self.

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2011-06-15 11:39 AM

I like the development. But everyone can leave, and I'll still never write truly. Someone might come back and notice.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

5 posted 2011-06-15 11:58 AM

Ah, but you are writing, and the proof is just above.
Maybe that person just took a shower, and you had the time to write a few lines.
Send them to the store and you can jot a few more. Your fans are waiting.
Delightful

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2011-06-15 01:12 PM

Sissie...I know just what you mean. Perhaps an assumed name would work until then? Hmmm, maybe not. I must say though, that I really enjoyed the honesty in this duet.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2011-07-17 01:10 AM

When?

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