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Open Poetry #47
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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
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0 posted 2011-07-13 03:43 PM

I am drenched in silver smoke
With my weekend brandy mates,
Laughing at the same old jokes,
Taking part in drunk debates.

When my forces get united,
I will leave the noisy bar,
Soon to find myself invited
To a ride in someone's car.

Midnight dates, adventures, strangers,
Mad ideas for some fun,
The temptation of the danger
To be liked by everyone,

Lust, elation, merging faces
Lighten all the darkest days.
But past love's lost scattered traces
Aren't that easy to erase...
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
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1 posted 2011-07-17 01:51 AM

This is a pretty good write, certainly worthy of an elevator to the top of the page once again.
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