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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-06-05 08:20 AM

I'll brighten
the moon and
shine on you.

I'll hand you
glitter stars
one by one.

I'll love you
'til the moon
and stars dim.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-06-05 08:56 AM

Now that's a promise that will make her cheeks glow, dear Jerry! So romantic and lovely!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-06-05 09:38 AM

Very romantic Jerry...are you working on a romance novel or something else...

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-06-05 09:44 AM

Good morning, Margherita , just working on my soft side. Thanks for the compliment.

Lori, no romance novel or even something else, I just felt amorous. It happens. Haha! Actually I am working on a new novel, "Gemini Descending," but it has nothing to do with this poem.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

AlCowie
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 92
London, UK

4 posted 2011-06-05 12:31 PM

A romantic invitation - I couldn't make such promises to a girl these days, wouldn't want to raise expectations!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-06-05 01:02 PM

Hah! Why not, Al, keep a happy heart and miracles can, and sometimes do, happen.

Haha! Listen to the original grouch (me) talking . . .

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

6 posted 2011-06-05 06:19 PM

I don't know that I have ever fallen in love, but I think I have stepped in it a few times. Lovely poem.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2011-06-05 06:31 PM

Thanks, Duck, most of us have stepped in it, true love is not that easy to find or to give. You have to work at it and most people (including me) don't.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-06-05 10:24 PM

i love it, JerryPat...great job...i enjoyed the softer side of you in this one

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2011-06-05 10:26 PM

Thanks Faith. I enjoyed writing this little cutie.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2011-06-06 01:03 AM

Yes, this poem is a little cutie. The softer side of you is such a nice side, Jerry.

Owl

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

11 posted 2011-06-06 10:32 PM

"I'll hand you
glitter stars
one by one."

...nice, very nice

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2011-06-06 10:45 PM

Hello Owl, thanks for stopping by, I very much appreciate it.

steavenr, good to see you here also.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

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