Open Poetry #47 |
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Sorry's Touch |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa ![]() |
SORRY’S TOUCH 20 May 2011 It knifes me that you are hurting because our blend was blurred in the night flying. Take my sorry and read my throbbing heart again in the bright of day and let the kind sun warm-whisper to you what you mean to me and whom I know you to be. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are the kind sun that whispers beautifully, dear Owl. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, my dear friend, Margherita. Smiles. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
To apologize, to forgive, to say I'm sorry all on the road to a higher ground. We are all human , sometimes it is so hard to remember. I really did love this. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, EmmaRose. It is the only way. If one has hurt somebody, no matter whom, one needs to and should want to apologise. Owl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your emotional honesty is a credit to your fine writing Diana. Uncovering the spin off of truth is fodder for real quality writing like this. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady owl....your tender is lovely.. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'd most assuredly like to find that warm-whispering,kind sun !! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Eric for your kind words. Thank you, Dark, for your exquisite reply. I hope you do, Bruce. Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful Owl, these are lovely words and a very attentionnate message, have a nice day yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Yann. Your kind words are much appreciated and very well timed. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This touch of "sorry" should fix anything, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ida. It almost did. Owl |
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