Open Poetry #47 |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
They speak of things with sound less voice things to hear without an ear driven by desires not my own unaware they're in my home Often it seems they know me not when they talk of me as if I am not and so I sit, being ignored listening intently to the voices in my head. Edward A. Beerman |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'd wander off and get a second opinion myself ![]() enjoyed this one |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, I too wish those voices had an "off" button ![]() -Trina. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The brain is such a computer collector of thought that you never know what's going to be rolling around in your head. You wrote this very well. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Those voices. I know them well. They are, even after all these years, are still in my head. When early morning quietness seeps into my being |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
Wish those voices we're faster on my behalf..I speak befor I ve thought things out too much |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sometimes I wish those voices would just stay in my head and behave themselves. Interesting write. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love your expression "sound less voice." Nice write...a thinkable one |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Found this treasure on the back pages. Enjoyed... ![]() |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
LOL from the sounds of it you and I would make a quite a pair maybe the voices in our head are talking to each other lol jkn anyway enjoyed the read....peace friend!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this -Juju |
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