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Open Poetry #47
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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California
0 posted 2011-05-14 02:15 AM

In the rear view i see a regret
Figuring it out now
Let me remember before i forget
Why did i wait this long

Let me slip away
Even when I listen
Your heart keeps taking me away
© Copyright 2011 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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1 posted 2011-05-14 09:09 AM

This is very good, dear Jared.

I see in your profile, that you have posted a total of 64 poems (originating posts) and your total posts amount to 68. It means you never ever comment on other poets' works. In the spirit of this forum I invite you to interact more, simply for reciprocal joy.

Love,
Margherita
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