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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-05-13 11:28 AM

perhaps the bubble wrap musicals
of autumn under waffle house soles
leaving behind tea leaves in jigsaw

or wood pecker carpenters building cathedrals
pecking through the fir fur sundown
then moving into hollow hearts to worship

or adolescent winds, barely breezes now
from just up the road window where they left
to cello a hanging sign into swing sounds

and tiptoe coffee in her long shirt gown
making sure she is there before yes please
can make this smile have any other uses

than just to be her rocking chair shivaree

____________

daark

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-05-13 11:56 AM

or perhaps the forest in the valley has secret glens with hidden waterfalls and a large rock to sit on and watch the water falling, falling, falling and share the beauty of its serenade . . .

Owl

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-05-13 11:57 AM

thanks lady Owl..

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-05-15 10:21 AM

You have outdone yourself with this one, dear D.!

I love every single line, but picked out just this one that I adore:

quote:
or adolescent winds, barely breezes now

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

4 posted 2011-05-15 10:23 AM

Love your wood pecking carpenters here and the world you carve yourself into from all
the crevices that wander through your mind's home.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2011-05-15 10:45 PM

I love all your little nuances, putting them together is challenging at best.

....but always worth the read.

Cool, dude~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2011-05-16 04:53 AM

I once read in the N.Y. Times book review section,a critic say that romantic poetry did not have a place in the modern era, as a critical cut against a poem he was doing a critique on.

He should have read this one, he might have thought differently.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-05-16 05:51 AM

ms mar...humble thanks lady friend

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er...thanks lady for the glances

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babyblue...you have been there...lovely setting I think...thanks babe

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thanks Ice...I seldom listen to critics..on any subject.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2011-05-16 06:58 PM

Delicious...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2011-05-17 05:42 AM

thanks JM

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2011-05-20 01:48 AM

This my Dark Stranger Poetry Night - and how happy I am not to miss this poem. You know, I hear the cellos and feel that smile.

ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2011-05-20 11:31 AM

thanks ali-san...

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