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Open Poetry #47

In Frith

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2011-05-05 11:26 PM

The glistening wet,
a small waterfall
directed by the wind,
lachrymose
won't bring you back.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-05-06 01:54 AM

so sad. I had to look up lachrymose - what a great word.

xoxoox
Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-05-06 04:05 AM

Though I couldn't find "Frith"'s meaning, your words are extremely touching to my heart.

Beautiful in its melancholy.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-05-06 08:36 AM

Since you have come to a peaceful agreement on your loss, more tears are wasted. Nice work. Excellent, actually.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-05-06 03:56 PM

Beautiful and sad, and with what could be a negative hopelessness, but my guess is that it is, in fact, an awakening hopefulness!

Owl

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2011-05-06 04:06 PM

I really like this.

I had to ponder about it before I commented lol!

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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