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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-05-04 02:46 PM

RHAPSODY IN D MAJOR
5 May 2011

Silver moonlit pathway,
flowing through the heart
of a breathing, mystical forest,
dark branch arms arching over
a liquid golden vixen
on her way home
to her foxhole.

Owl

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-05-04 03:13 PM

Beautiful portrait.....

Dreamgal

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-05-04 03:23 PM

Beautiful. We have foxes where we live and they are a delight to watch.
Lori

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

3 posted 2011-05-04 05:18 PM

This lovely poem could be metaphrical for many things. Its beauty is in its careful choice of words and brevity of composition resulting in a tightly woven tapestry of poetic beauty.

May your gifted pen never run dry dear Owl.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-05-04 06:02 PM

Thank you, Dreamgal.  I am glad you enjoyed it.

Oh, Lori, that must be wonderful.  Thank you for reading and telling me about your beautiful and shy creature neighbours.

Thank you, Marcia, Word Weaver par excellence.  I am honoured by your exquisite multiple compliments.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-05-05 04:48 AM

Your pen is golden and shines through the dark, dear Diana!

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-05-05 12:31 PM

Thank you, Margherita, for your kind words.

Owl

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-05-05 01:39 PM

blend of innocent and the strum of mischief here ms O..enjoyed it

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-05-05 04:32 PM

You see well in the dark, Dark - glad you enjoyed it. Smiles.

Owl

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2011-05-05 11:27 PM

A gorgeous view.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2011-05-06 03:35 PM

Thank you Kaoru for sharing and enjoying my corner of the forest. Smiles.

Owl

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