Open Poetry #47 |
My Darling Friend. |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
If you could be anyone for 24hours - Who would you be? ------- and you asked why? Why would I choose to be you, when I could be anyone You who is abused and neglected- plagued with sadness I'd choose you because You are exquisite My darling friend. I would bear your burden feel your heartache cry your tears- just so you wouldn't have to. -Trina A weakened heart is far from innocent. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ohhhh, now this is a magnificent act of love, dear Trina. You displayed your heart most poignantly. Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good to see you back, Trina. Everyone should have a guardian angel such as you painted here. Great poem. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Great to see you Trina! This is compassion at its selfless best. Love your stuff! Lori |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..sensitivity and good heart; a poem to truly please the recipient..>>spiros |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Thanx Margherita! ^_^ Thanx Jerry! Thanx Lori! Thanx Spiros! -Trina |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Beautiful... Such is love! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What a wonderful friend you are to your friend, Trina! Lovely poem too. Owl |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Thanx Dawn. Thanx Owl. -Trina |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You have touched me, truly touched me. xoxoox Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
can we expect more, this is so moving, so touching..thank you for this jewel, yann |
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