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The Look |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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THE LOOK 22 April 2011 She was writing at her yellow-wooded desk, in the quiet of the night, tranquil, pen moving hungrily over the paper, with her dog at her feet and her cat on the desk. Silently he appeared in the doorway. She sensed the warmth of his presence and turned her head upwards to him and their smiling eyes bridged the distance and the room glowed in their radiance. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Romance most beautifully expressed. You radiate love through every word, dear Owl. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, my dear friend, Margherita. Coming from the Epitome of Love of all good kinds, that is praise indeed! Smiles. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and that is how it is when both are attuned to the galaxy's wonderful passion machine . . . ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks diana for the sweet and vivid portrait, i can see and love the scene with enchantment and quietness of inspiration...Thanks for the lovely poem. yann |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Beautiful is the only word that describes this poem. You write it in a way that I felt I was there. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Jerry. Yes, you are right, but there is so much more than just passion. Thank you, Yann, for your lovely reply. Than you, Marcia, for your kind words. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Like a scene from an old movie, only much better. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ida, smiling. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"tranquil, pen moving hungrily over the paper" ...loved the way you described the writing process...makes me wish my muse would visit more often  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Steaven. Why wait for your muse to visit you? Try visiting your muse instead, Lol! Owl |
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