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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-04-22 01:04 PM

Take me in your arms
and cover me with kisses
Melt my world away
Murmur words of wanting
in my eager ears
Let your lips
slip softly on my neck
and beyond
to my wildest wishes

LGR©4/22/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-04-22 01:09 PM

Then get the heck outta there. Haha! Just kidding. That came from your comment on my "Sin" senryu.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2011-04-22 02:39 PM

Let's hope he obeys your lovely demands. I'm sure he will again and again.

Helen

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-04-22 02:44 PM

Felt a little rush across the back of my neck.

Love it!

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

4 posted 2011-04-22 04:15 PM

What a kiss !!! Whew.........

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2011-04-22 06:24 PM

FINE 'Romanticism' !

great 'write' !!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2011-04-22 08:15 PM

You do romatic poetry very well, Lori.
Ida

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2011-04-22 09:28 PM

...and I knew you
when your poems were

l
o
n
g

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2011-04-23 04:33 AM

Spring makes your pen dance, dear Lori!

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2011-04-24 10:46 AM

hi lori, this is such a romance to share and be happy, thanks

yann

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2011-04-25 01:11 AM

Ah, enjoyed this, my friend!

j.

[This message has been edited by jwesley (04-25-2011 02:33 PM).]

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

11 posted 2011-04-26 11:43 PM

"Murmur words of wanting
in my eager ears"

...nice, very nice...loved your word usage here

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