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Open Poetry #47

Time Tick

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2011-04-23 06:41 PM

flower petals fall

transient hope of beauty

past shining moments

©2011 by icebox

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-04-24 05:36 AM

Precious memories:
heart gardens bloom forever
hope remains constant

You inspired the haiku reply, with your beautiful thought provoking "time tick".

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2011-04-29 02:10 AM

I love it when so few words create such a beautiful thought.
Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-04-29 09:05 AM

beautiful. It created an image for me that is the essence of Spring.
Lori

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-08-25 03:52 PM

"transient hope of beauty"
All beauty is transient, but not beauty of the heart, that is forever,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-08-25 04:45 PM

I'm thinking autumn here. Nice bit of wordplay is this haiku.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2011-08-26 01:31 PM

It is close to haiku. this has no "cutting" word and, of course, is in English...and it has a title (generally not acceptable).

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