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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 This love, my love, has provided me with wings. And we fly, oh we fly! But should you ever distractedly drop me or involuntarily lose sight of me, I would still be able to soar and to go on, for the gifts of this love, my love, have made me strong, forever immeasurably gratefully strong. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You fly so high Margherita, and your wing span is admired by many. Beautiful work, good poetess~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Now that is what I call strong love. Nice. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Such a beautiful poem, Margherita, and so imbued with your wonderful spirit - and I absolutely LOVE the photo - one of the loveliest I have ever seen. I don't know how you did it, but it is dreamy and exquisite and no wonder it inspired you to write the poem - or matched the poem, if you wrote the poem first. Owl |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...for the gifts of this love, my love, have made me strong," Brilliant! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
My feelings, but you put them into words so beautifully . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lori, it is always a joy to receive your visit and your precious, generous comments. Oh, I love your vision of the wing span! Thank you! Thank you so much, dear Jerry, for your loving reply! Oh, the power of love! Thank you, my dear Owl, for your most generous and loving comment. I could not find the author's name of this picture, I love it too. I had googled: "abstract ethereal wings" and this was one of the pictures which came up. My inspiration is always born within my heart. Of course a picture can generate emotions too ... I love to associate my words with an appropriate picture, possibly my own. Dear Charly, I am very grateful for your loving presence on this thread. Dear Martiyo, you are missed here on Pip and it makes me happy to find you here with such a kind and loving reply. It is a divine love ... on this Easter Day we can read it that way too. Love and Happy Easter to all. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi margherita, your poem shows the strenght of love and the truth of feelings, this is outstanding and hopeful...Thanks for the superb words. yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Margherita. It's a wonderful testimony to the power of love and strengthened so I know you will soar forever. Love Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart, dear Yann, for your generous loving comment! Dear Helen, thank you so much, yes true love is a lasting gift indeed and its energy can be evoked in every moment anew. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...lady wings and sweet heart music...you do them well always |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita...very lovely image of love and strength captured by your pen. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are the Queen of romance, Margherita. No one writes it like you do. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear D., thank you so much for your appreciation of my "lady wings and heart music". It is indeed an inspiring combination. Thank you, dear Martie, it is a joy and a gift always when you come in to read and comment so kindly. Dear Ida, thank you for such a spirited comment ... you have me smiling big ... oh! Crowns oblige ...  I have just written a new one and will soon share it.Love and joy. Margherita |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Oh this is beautiful, so romantic! Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Loved this for all the above mentioned reasons and this: for the gifts of this love, my love, have made me strong, forever immeasurably gratefully strong. It gave me a new insight into the power of love...Bless your heart Lori |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What can I say? The picture is incredible - the poem is more so. Love like this is far too rare, I think. Or maybe we just don't give it the freedom to soar enough. Margherita, I love your poem and I love your heart. xoxoxo Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Trina, dear Lori and dear Alison, you brought joy with your loving comments. Thank you so much. Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Margherita this is love at its greatest beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My favorite of yours to date, my friend...beautifully rendered. j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kate, it's so nice that you came in here and with such a loving comment. Thank you so much. Dear Jimmy, thank you from my heart for telling me how much you enjoyed this. Indeed, may we always deeply appreciate the gift of love. Love, Margherita |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The power of love so wonderfully expressed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Earl, thank you so much for your loving comment. It's a joy to see you here, I keep Japan and you in my thoughts and prayers. Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
With a love this strong, you win, even if you lose..That concept is somewhere in a Shakespeare play, but I forget where? I believe the picture is of a blured Bird-Of Paradise flower, and leaves...fits the poem very well enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well done (an effectively 'shaped' write)! grand visual imagery as well! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Ford, for your loving comment. That concept is in fact a universal truth I would say. Your interpretation of the picture is great, you are a keen observer. Dear Bruce, thank you so much. It feels good to have you read and enjoy "my stuff". Love, Margherita |
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