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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Pain... Endless ripples Like the stinging of wind blown sand A constant ache A never ending bleed of heart Pain... Like hands at my throat squeezing Tears held back until it feels like the ocean beating at me Pain... Tearing its way through my mind Like a runaway train on an endless track Pain... Blacker than the depths of hell Colder than a serpenst kiss All because....I love you |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sounds like quite a destructive kind of love to me. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
That's fixable pain, my friend. Cool Write. j. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice to see you again, Paula!! ...and with such an uplifting piece!!!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, it's good to see you and to read you, dear Paula. Love your painful love expressions! No love without pain they say ... Love, Margherita |
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