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ladder day saint pablo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said it was something by pablo or some other name on your leather not that you selected by title but more how it fit your sins and made the lovely of you cry between the gushing rungs there of your pleasure ladder ascension and then sliding back down again you said it reminded you of soup how it soothed where you ached and made you not want to stop needing the kneading you discovered you gave me your numbers at random and asked me to try them in order as you might be lost most anywhere but you needed to know I was waiting to be your very best last one ever _____________ daark |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
For the most part you completely go over/under/around my head when you write your ditties. I can see the poetical expertise that it takes to write these gems, it is just that I have never been good at riddles. I flunked the riddle course at the college of hard knocks almost every time I was given a test. However, I do admire how you phrase your lines and verses, and sometimes (hey!hey!) I even "get" it. But not today, even with the clue in the title. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
jp...there are usually only a couple of viewers that would recognize the small boxes I include in my ink...I guess I write for them mostly. Thanks for the drive by. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
The curved strokes of your brush, paint tear-soothing colours on the almost lost Harley jacket – and no, not the title. Possibly my favourite of yours so far. Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (04-21-2011 03:06 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay, Owl, I was even wrong about the title. Big deal. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Jerry, that was a comment to DS, not an explanation of the poem. Smiles. Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh this is so nice, I like your ending and the sliding back down effect. You are the sweetest temptation, dark stranger dude~x/o |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Owl...thank you for your glances on my pen ms..you bless me. ___________ Babyblue, thank you babe, you so smile me. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What small boxes?  Anyway, with or without recognizing them ... your outstanding poetry makes me fly up the ladder of pleasure.  Love and smiles, Margherita |
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