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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115


0 posted 2011-04-19 08:10 PM



Ripping into feelings held with in,
captivated by grounds unwalked for too long.
Watching time pass, took time to have my fun.
Danced on the club floors, slept in a few other beds.
Seen and done things undone.

Words drift inside my ribs, like ribbons around my heart.
Wanting something to bring home,
something to share.
A chest to lay my head on,
ride shot gun in his truck.

Single life is fun.
Its a blast for sure,
no regrets.
Just ready to start settling in.
Time for a strong chest to lay my head,
and to ride shot gun in a pick up truck.

*hugs*

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-04-20 07:06 AM


Every now and then total freedom brings this kind of melancholy and dreams of love enter a lonely heart just like this.

Very nicely expressed.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

2 posted 2011-04-20 12:58 PM


thank you so much for your feed back.

*hugs*

Daddy Goose38
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since 2010-09-04
Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger
3 posted 2011-04-20 06:25 PM


Well Twisted pup. unfortunatly I'm not hot, just cool.
I don't even had a pickup truck.
In fact, I can't even drive!
But perhaps I can drive you crazy!!!

porky118
Junior Member
since 2011-03-31
Posts 15
minnesota
4 posted 2011-04-21 08:24 PM


i think this is one of the best ones i have read from you good job keep it up
twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

5 posted 2011-04-21 09:02 PM


well daddy goose, i would love to be driven crazy,lol.

*hugs*

twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

6 posted 2011-04-21 09:08 PM


Again thank you all so much for all your feedback!

*hugs*

porky118
Junior Member
since 2011-03-31
Posts 15
minnesota
7 posted 2012-01-17 12:24 PM


im a hot guy twistedpup ill evan marry you soon very soon if you will only be mine.........lol
twistedpup
Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

8 posted 2012-01-17 12:35 PM


OMG!
I didnt remember this poem until porky118 comented on it.
I have to say, I put alot of passion into this one. wow.

and again feedback no matter when the poem is from is always loved very much. thank's porky!

*hugs*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
9 posted 2012-01-17 09:23 AM


I hear every word of this, twistedpup. There does come a time when the party needs to shut down and another kind of dance commence. I have been where you are now. I was lucky. I found someone who rode shotgun in my pick'em-up truck. My hope is that you will also.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2012-01-17 09:31 AM


ms pup...enjoyed this view...you could always just get a job with the highway department....they usually sit in the sun all day in their pickup trucks and sleep on each others shoulder..may as well be paid well for what you are doing..(sorry had to go there..ever ridden shotgun on a stroked out Harley)


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