A few of my favorite things...

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Open Poetry #47

A few of my favorite things...

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-04-11 07:01 PM

Lazy hazy days, sipping
lemonade, on my hammock
by the tree, this is the
life for me.
or...
Walking in the sand,
by the ocean hand
& hand, stealing a
kiss or two, feeling
so in love with you.
or...
Swimming in my pool,
on a sticky nite in
june, the stars are
in the sky, were
together you & I.

And last but never
least, just my little
boy & me, going out
to "play" theres
simply nothing more
to say..

Dreamgal

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-04-11 07:31 PM

Yes all of these are wonderful ways to spend our precious time, dear Dreamgal.

Very nice indeed!

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2011-04-11 07:34 PM

Yep, and 30 years from now you're going to look back on this piece and say ' Yep! They still apply'.

Really enjoyed this...

j.

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

3 posted 2011-04-11 07:34 PM

Thank you as always Margherita!

Dreamgal
*smiles*

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

4 posted 2011-04-11 07:36 PM

And a thank you to you mr. Jwesley!!

Dreamgal
*smiles*

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-04-11 08:28 PM

Sounds to me that you have "got" the life, dreamgal, and if so, three cheers for being able to write such poems with so much love within your heart.

~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-04-11 08:57 PM

very sweet and gentle...i really love the simplicity in this one...it made for a powerful poem

very nicely done, Dreamgal

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

7 posted 2011-04-11 09:26 PM

Jerry,

Yes, my life is pretty good. Its only what I make of it really, its far from perfect
got problems mixed in too.

Faith,

Thank you so much as always for your reply
and comments. Means alot.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2011-04-17 11:20 PM

Very nice...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2011-04-18 03:21 AM

Sounds like a dream, Dreamgal.
Ida

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