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This Man.. |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey 
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The more I discover about this man, the more admiration and desire for him begin to flood my being. At first introduction to an interesting person, I am oftentimes deceived by an ideal persona that seemingly defines the person. Upon further examination, I uncover their true identity- which is usually pretty disheartening. But this man… This man is different. So far, at least. Unlike the others before him, which start off wonderful and end up fading into a perfect person for someone other than me, this man becomes more astounding with each new piece of his life I acquire knowledge about. This man is beyond polite and kind-hearted, never speaking a hurtful or demeaning word in my direction me, even as a joke. This man has the same religious beliefs as me, though I’ve only met a handful of other people who do as well. This man is a talented musician and excels in a myriad of different musical aspects. This man has adoration for the environment. The women this man lays down with are not disposable partners. The vocabulary this man uses is tasteful, more often than not. It is effortless for this man to paste a smile on my face. The respect this man has towards others never fails to show, and I have never heard this man speak a judgmental word about anyone. This man sees the good in everything. This is the first man I’ve met whose flaws are so minor to me, that they matter not. It’s safe to say, I shall continue to learn the ins and outs of this man… It would be foolish not to! *Amber |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
The women this man lay down with are not disposable partners. I like the way you describe him, or getting to know the ins and outs of this guy, it would be foolish not to. Sounds like a really decent guy you want to definetly keep getting to know. Good write and description. Good luck! lol Dreamgal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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