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Open Poetry #47

a chance on love

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2011-04-08 10:01 PM

    a chance on love

Love …

always a timeless mystery
and though sometimes
  lost
is never wasted.
The finest of gifts
is new love,
born of forgiveness
and unconditional,
which can only wait
in patient hope
of  acceptance
and return.

      --- b. e. adams (4/8/2011)

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-04-08 11:29 PM

What a beautiful, hopeful piece of writing, I really enjoyed it.

Thanks for sharing,
Dreamgal

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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2 posted 2011-04-08 11:36 PM

Bruce,

I am loving this. I feel a new hope in this poem ~ and I hope that is the case. You are a splendid writer and I truly enjoy your poetry.

Alison

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-04-09 08:51 AM

Bruce, besides being an exquisite poem, I absolutely love the positive ambiance and strength of this. Best wishes for a new happiness.

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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4 posted 2011-04-09 09:57 AM

Likely 'too late' for me, my friends ... but, hopefully ... this 'love impression' will be of 'inspiration' to others!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-04-09 08:01 PM

Uplifting and beautifully written, Bruce. Brightened my cold, grey day.
Ida

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-04-17 04:48 PM

you were right...I did like it on many levels...as others have noted, in ambiance, in attitude, in aspiration, and in a whole bunch of other words that start with 'a' that I just can't think of right now.

...truly, well-written...enjoyed

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

7 posted 2011-04-17 05:05 PM

Very wise and very beautiful, dear Bruce!

love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2011-04-18 07:35 PM

Absolutely...James

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