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cash n' glow convent & maryjoe |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I could have loved her even in wicker wings with the leather straps holding them down crossing her bosom playground in brown leaving those lines when she was wingless and so proud of how her pedestal was designed but I was more loveless then, including ruth there were only those mortal cravings that left me hard hearted within my skin an embossed intrusion more than the illusion that she would rub against with repetition we made our vowing at the drive through store where liquor was the witness to our weddings and back rooms with experience were the grooms and maids of dishonorable, intentionally perfected within the undulations of our sand so now I am as the paper skin of eucalyptus trees and she is the stone that marks willow lane guiding those of other dreams to righter wings instead of being too far left, and left behind _______________ daark (if it feels political, it probably is) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm not feeling the political aspect of it all, but you do a nice twist anyway. I guess there is so much more that comes to mind and I like where I'm going with it. Back rooms are not all that shabby. You are such a cool dude, dude~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue... this one had a big window facing the street and a pool table with a perfect view..thanks babe |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I searched for political also. Didn't see it. DARK, you camouflage too well. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mumbled thanks JP.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There might be some strategy also in relationships of love, just as there is in politics. This is masterfully written and extremely appealing also because of its introspective depth. You are always a challenge, so rich in imagery and hints that reading you is always an exciting adventure. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ms mar..... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You write in puzzles and there are times taht I strive to understand the meaning ~ and feel like I am missing the message inside a larger message. You are a code talker, Poetry man. I understand part of this, and other parts take me down rabbit holes into my imagination. Than, I think that I don't have to understand - I just have to open my mind and enjoy the fall. Thank, Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..she is america....heading so far left she will be left behind...and I am heading more right...thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I almost got it - I figured the right-left thing. Thank you for helping me along. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
As usual what's not to love....glad to be back here for sure... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
glad to see you lady!! thanks |
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