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Alone Tonight
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Alone Tonight |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey 
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Inspiration has been lacking. All excitement’s nonexistent. Screaming silence is attacking me. And, boy, is it persistent. Every wall’s splattered with empty, Every window’s seeping darkness. This bed’s consumed with lonely, And this body’s feeling heartless. *Amber |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow, Amber! That's quite an outpouring of lonliness...I like it!!!!  the poem....not your lonliness!  |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
Thank you, thank you! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The seeping and the silence are not much comfort for a heart that aches. I like this very much, it's raw and deeply felt. |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
You really conveyed your feelings in a raw & vulnerable way. I liked this alot. Im sorry your feeling this way, please keep your chin up. Dreamgal |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Ohhhhhhhh ... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I suppose I've had a few nights like this...or more than a few...James |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nice write, After a few hundred lonely nights they get easier to accept. Personal experience. Gloom |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhh...the wilderness of solitude...makes one take pause and reflect...nicely done |
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