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Open Poetry #47

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AlCowie
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 92
London, UK

0 posted 2011-06-03 01:48 PM

Another one based on Weathers by Thomas Hardy (don't worry, I'm fine!)

This is the feeling romantics adore,
And so do I;
When Angels nibble and tickle the core
And hearts fly high;
And thoughts of all else just flutter away,
And the lights of the night brightly sparkle and play,
And the fool takes a ride on a runaway sleigh,
And insatiably craves the sensation all day,
And so do I.

This is the feeling discardeds detest,
And so do I;
When Demons take wing and claw at the chest,
And hearts scream “Why?”;
And light has no colour and all is bland,
And the pain of their name sears your brain like a brand,
And all that’s unsaid is just And And And,
And the miserable die in a desolate land,
And so do I.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-06-03 01:55 PM

Love this one too!
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-06-03 03:32 PM

Dittoes Lori.

~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-06-06 11:09 PM

and, as have others said, "so do I"

...nicely done

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2011-06-06 11:14 PM

This was Great! Enjoyed
Kat >^..^<

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