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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
treading soft up to the night unto a star which to alight it matters not which star to choose for in their glow all disabuse man and beast of earthly learnings no more to ache of mortal yearnings is not sky's blue but a facade as was the gild of priest's ephod midnight's beckon all proceed into dark depth's of midnight's screed whirling dervish, Charybdis into the void of night's abyss [This message has been edited by Tim (03-27-2011 11:01 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, this is fascinating poetry. Most excellent writing, Sir~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I agree with BluesS, this leaves me pondering quite a few things...which is a good thing.  Enjoyed. -Trina Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
From bright to dark this evokes many images of deadly progress. Strong poetry to consider. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
For some strange reason, Tim, I began to think of C.S. Lewis' "The Space Trilogy" as I read this interesting and deep poem. I think it was the unbelievable tone (in my opinion) of the poem. At any rate, I very much like your wordplay. ~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautifully written and expressed, Tim. Ida |
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