Open Poetry #47 |
Vacuity |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
By putting my pencil down on this paper And writing words which sound alike I allow you to see a sliver of my soul And can only pray that you'll be kind Judgment rarely stands as friend Whether condemning or being oneself condemned It seems if such judgment is our only ally We'll all be lonely in the end So I beg you please be kind Though if criticism is justice sweet Leave your thoughts, kind words ...or hate (Though I pray that's not the case) And leave them at my feet And I'll read them later For first I must wonder If criticism is harsh Yet justice be called sweet How can both in equality be lain In complacency at my feet? In consequence of temperament calm? Nay. Tranquil perception? Perhaps. (Death's worst trap, no doubt) And I wonder if from this vacuity I shall ever find a way out... |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I really thought you conveyed your true self ,put it out there, you have a beautiful true way with words. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Thank you |
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