Open Poetry #47 |
The Mask |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Mask Someday I'll take off my sad mask, and my happy face will be revealed. Someday soon its bound to happen, I pray to God that it will. JamesLee 07March 2011 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is so heart-felt...i can really relate...i'm working on getting to a happier place myself...love your poem! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I actually can relate, but I've gotten so used to my dour old face mask I've actually come to like it. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now, that's up to you, dear James. Smile NOW and you will feel the change occurring. God and the Universe will collaborate! How many masks are carried around? Too many indeed. Well done, dear James. Love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good one James I like the meaning, well described. Eric |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
i understand completly. this is the first poem of yours ive read, i like it. *hugs* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
When you do, I hope that you write about it. You write about "emotions" very well. A |
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