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Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

0 posted 2011-01-10 08:57 PM

I go to bed only for my dreams.

In dreams everything is right.

Its the perfect world.

I never want to wake up.

It feel so right with you there.

Reality comes flooding back with being awake.

I lay there for hours.

Wishing I could escape back into that magical place.

Always wishing.

I go through the day, waiting for the night.

When I can escape again,

To that wonderful place.

Only possible in a dream.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-10 09:35 PM

i know how this feels and i could feel the emotion in your words...a sad and moving poem!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

2 posted 2011-01-11 12:41 PM

i like your poem very much.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-01-11 02:40 AM

You've written the emotions of a love not returned exceptionally well.
Enjoyable read.

Eric

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2011-01-11 04:15 AM

Ah, but be wary of nightmares. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2011-01-11 04:24 AM

..>>quite clear and entertaining; i enjoyed
reading your poem..>>spiros

l'artiste
Junior Member

since 2011-12-01

Posts 19
Washington

6 posted 2012-01-20 12:08 PM

I very much enjoyed this poem

it is well written, I often feel this way.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2012-01-20 12:30 PM

I hear you, Elric, reality is a bummer sometimes.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2012-01-20 05:17 PM

"An idle longing, night and day
To dream my very life away."

I believe that's how Poe described it. I know well the felling.

Michael

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2012-01-21 11:30 AM

Dreams are nice aren't they, but in my mind, living for dreams is a loss of the reality I could have . . . reality being more stressed and harder to accomplish, but more wonderful in the end.

Enjoyed, my friend,

j.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2012-01-23 11:16 AM

How well I understand!

Reality keeps interfering with life as I'd like it... only found in slumber or daydreams. Great write!

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