Open Poetry #47 |
Sunny Days |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
the sky could be cloudy overcast and gray there could be heard rumbling in the heavens lightning cracking loud and close the bottom could fall out rain and hail and such you would see me with a smile on my face seeing only sunny skies and bluer than blue heavens love is the reason for my madness my heart given to another nothing can come against that love to tear it asunder make it grow cold and hateful so come on let the storm roll on in I'm smiling and seeing the sun for the sun is always there within my sweethearts soul we blend together we're meshed and as one nothing can pry us apart ©January 19, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yeah buddy!! You go.... Excellent attitude. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, JL. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Ah the eye of the storm is in this one. Everything else can go to hell in a handbasket. I liked this one a lot Jerry. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is great Jerry, sunny days always when there is a smiling face in the world Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I appreciate your kind words, Nicole, they were sunny indeed. <><> Thank you, tracie66, for stopping by and reading and commenting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You are a fortunate man Jerry, warms my hear to see you so happy Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
thunderstorms scare the bejesus out of me...love can make one oblivious to it though! ~write-on~
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely, Baby Girl, true love can overcome many obstacles. Thank you for continuing to support my poetry. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Me likes this. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I wondered if that title would entice you to read and comment. Thank you, Sunshine, I'm happy you liked it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And it did. I haven't been around as much as I like - I need to FIX that part of my life! Priorities, y'know! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh yes, I am quite aware of priorities, Sunshine. That's why I'm double glad when I can coax you back into my den. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, you have described a truly wonderful place to be... So caught up in the love of another that absolutely nothing from the outside world can touch you. Well done, my friend. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Michael. Love came to me at a late date, but I'm just as in love now as a teenager's first crush. Appreciate you blessing my love with your presence. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have captured that amazing irrepressable feeling of love that knows no boundaries. What an uplifting piece ... great writing Jerry. Best wishes, /Kit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
As long as one isn't 'blinded by the light', my friend, love is all that and more... Glad to see you so smitten! j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely, K, love has no boundaris. Thanks for being here . . . <><> That happens often the blinded by the light, j. Thank you for your comments. ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just for surviving a long time ago ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful place to be! I wish continued sunny days for you and your lady... whatever the weather! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for thumbing through this old page for my poem. Sunny days are in our plans, thank you again. ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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