Open Poetry #45 |
Orchestrated Movement |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Moving softly as do the strains of a Stradivarius playing some midnight symphony of orchestrated strings reverberating through my very core, each chord plays my senses the notes, echoing into the depths of a sacred desire that trembles me until comes the rise and fall of crescendos as we are lulled into a tender hush of two souls entwined within this rhapsody of love. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Such beautiful music you have composed, Donna. I can hear all the way up here. This is a really good poem - thank you for sharing it. xoxoxox A |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - lovely, just lovely... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A waltz of words, this is~ Have to love the crescendo~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ali, you are always far to kind to me, but I love you for it gal! Thanks so much hon. Hugs n peace ~D |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Donna, so good to read you again and with such a captivating happy theme! Beautifully done! Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill, Bluesy, Margherita, thank you all for slipping in on this one. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed. |
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